2018年9月8日雅思写作小作文范文

2018年9月8日雅思写作小作文题目：The table and charts below show the total value of fish imports to the US and the sources of fish imports to the US in 1997, 2002 and 2007.

Total value of fish imports to the US:

比较类型(二)：同项不同时(表格，每种颜色的扇形在不同时间点的大小)&同时不同项(每个“饼”的内部的三个扇形)

信息加工，确定写作内容：

1)2007时的数字比2002年时以及1997年时分别大出多少;

2)蓝色(Canada)1997=2002>2007;红色(China)1997<2002<2007;绿色(Other exporting countries)1997>2002=2007;

3)绿色(Other exporting countries)在这三个独立年份里都是maximum, 并且在2002年和2007年时与China份额相等。

来自新航道雅思培训班高分学员范文：

In terms of the total worth of fish imports to the US, in 2007, fish that was imported to the US was worth 10.4 billion dollars, 1.9 billion more than in 2002 and 3 billion more than in 1997.In terms of the countries from which the US imported fish, Canada and China were the two dominating sources. The years of 1997 and 2002 witnessed approximately the same share by Canada, a portion that was around one-third. Canada’s share had an obvious shrinkage to one-fifth in 2007. In 2007, roughly 40 percent of the total value of fish imports was attributed to China’s exports, and the figure was noticeably greater than that of 2002 and twice of that of 1997. In addition, all other source countries accounted for either the combined share made by Canada and China or the share of China.

【主语的频繁变化;语法现象的多样(Grammatical Range);表示程度的形容词(及对应的副词);表示变化/趋势的动词(及对应的名词)】

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课程内容

1、讲解写作评分标准; 2、补充数据类、图形类小写作过程中，必备的基本词汇、句型表达; 3、讲解小写作的基本框架、开头、段落、结尾写作技巧; 4、讲解小作文各类动静图的写作，让学员能完成各类题型，包括复杂的流程图、地图题; 5、讲解大作文的篇章结构和段落结构写作技巧，让学员快速搭建起一个大作文的框架; 6、讲解和精析范文，按照不同主题，补充核心词汇和表达句式，让学员在面对不同主题的写作任务时，都能有语言素材，配合逻辑框架，快速下笔

目标

1、词汇与句子正确，短句子全对，复杂句子基本没有问题; 2、文章结构清晰，每一段说明一重点

助教督学辅导

1、督促背单词，并保证拼写正确; 2、辅导学员翻译，并讲解翻译中学员不懂的语法规则