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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

I Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

题目分析，包括写作中需要讨论的观点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。

► ► 要点

1. 根据考生的观点(优势和劣势)，考生需要分析一些国家年轻人比老年人更多的优势和劣势。

2. 考生可以从社会、经济及就业等角度进行分析。

► ► 错误理解

1. 考生可能会写成年轻人的好处，而不是年轻人比老年人更多的好处。

2. 考生可能会无法很好地平衡优点和缺点，导致文章结论无法偏向某一立场。

参考范文一

In many countries, young people are often seen as the driving force of the economy. Therefore, policies to increase birth rates are generally encouraged. But there are also a variety of potential social problems arising if the younger population keeps rising and exceeds the number that a country is able to sustain.

It is true that a relatively large number of young adults may pose a threat to economic growth. The overcrowding of younger population inevitably leads to intense competition in the job market， and this would be followed by rising unemployment rate. Over the past few decades some developing countries like China adopted one-child policy in an effort to balance the population, and this effectively alleviated the pressure on the job market. If there were no such policy, there would be many unemployed young people, causing much pressure on economic growth.

However, the advantages of having a larger younger population are also evident. In some countries, economic development is stifled due to lack of human resources, e.g. Singapore. Here the country has more than adequate job opportunities and resources and in fact must get much of its labour force from abroad. To solve this problem and hence invest in its own economy, Singapore is introducing polices to attract a much larger youthful population. Without the youthful population, the country would struggle to see economic development.

In conclusion, I think that the large younger population can bring more advantages than disadvantages; however, it must be understood that too much of an imbalance can lead to difficulties in the future.

参考译文一

在一些国家，年轻人经常被视为经济的动力，因此提高生育率的政策为人们所提®。但是如年轻人口不断增长并超过了一个国家所能承受的数字，那么很多潜在的社会问題也会出现。

的确，年轻人口比例相对较多将会对经济增长产生危害」年轻人口过度拥挤，势必导致职场中的激烈竞争，那么这就会产生失业芈的上升。在过去几十年中，一播发展中国家如中面采取了计划生育政策旨在平衡人口,这有效地緩解了当时对职场中的压力。如果当时没有这样的政策，就可能会有大量的年轻人失业，对经济增长产生巨大压力。

然而，年 轻人口 比例更多的优势也显而易見。在一些国家，经济发展因人力资源的缺乏而受到制约，如新加坡。该国有着充足的就业机遇和资源，因此必须从海外引进大量的劳动力新加坡为了解决这个问題，并对其自身经济进行投资，推出政策以吸引大量的年轻人。如果没有这些年轻人的51入，新加坡将难以见证巨大的发展。

总而言之，我认为年轻人口更多利大于弊，但我们必须明白人口比例差太多会对未来造成很大影响。

参考范文二

There has been a growing young population in some countries of the world. Many are happy about this trend because they think young people symbolise the power of the country, but there are also some concerns about this situation.

I agree with the optimism about the large youthfil population and believe that they are Che driving force behind the economy. The birth of more people equates to a greater number of parents investing in fteir youth. Increased purchases in products such as food, clothings educatiorwdated expenses, and even toys spur the economy. Parents with two or three children purchase larger homes with more bedrooms and bathrooms to make room for their children. The larger homes that parents with children purchase feed the construction and home improvement industries ecoocmiicalty. Children then grow into adults who work for pay and spend it in the economy.

However, there is also a dark side to the picture. Despite the economic benefits from young population, the country may also fttce other problems, First, property shortage is a rising concern for many countries with more young adult population. This is because the large population of young people may fuel rising demand for housing and make those living in poverty fail to afford houses because of rising prices. Second, unemployment is also a potential risk. With more graduates flocking to the job market, they are likely to face unprecedented competition as there would be more candidates seeking one job position than ever before. This can be seen in some countries like Japan and China where the overwhelming competition may leave some of them unemployed.

In conclusion, I believe that there are more benefits if a country has a large younger population, but some risks of this situation can never be ignored. Some important measures nwd to be adopted to balance the population for the benefits of the country.

参考译文二

在世界上一些国家中，年轻人口数量日益增长。很多人对这一趋势表示乐观，因为他们认为年轻人象征着国家的力黃，但是也有一些人对这种情况表示担忧。

我赞同应对年轻人口比例大这一点保持乐观，并认为他们是经济发展的推动力出生的人口越多，就意味着父母在孩子身上的投入越多。如食品，衣服，教育相关费用，甚至文具等产品的昀买量的增加都会促进经济增。拥有两到三个孩子的家长会购买更大的房子，配有更多的卧室以及浴室来为他们的孩子縢出地方。父母为孩子购买更大的房子则会在经济上促进建筑以及房地产的发展。等孩子长大成人后，他们会工作并消费从而提振经济。

然而，凡事都有另一面。尽管年轻人会有利于经济发展，但是国家也会面咯其他问題。首先，房屋紧缺是很多年轻人口众多的国家所日益担忧的问題。这是因为大量的年轻人口将促进房屋需求量的增加，并使得那些穷人因房价上升而买不起房。其次，失业也是一个潜在的风险。随著更多的毕业生涌入职场，他们可能会面临前所未有的竞争，因为较以往将会有更多人竞争一个职位。这些情况已经发生在很多国家，如中国和曰本，其过度的竞争致使大量的人失业。

总而言之，我认为如果一个国家年轻人比老年人更多，似乎会有更多的好处，但这秤情况的风险也不容忽视。我们需要采取一些重要的举措来平衡人口比例，为了国家的利益。