剑10G类testA雅思写作大作文范文(一)

　　Writing Task 2

　　In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

　　a) 题目分析，包括写作中需要讨论的观点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。

　　讨论两个方面：犯罪增加的原因及可行的解决办法。考生或许会试图阐述犯罪减少的情况，这可能是实情，但与题目不符，不必要作如此论述。此外，考生能为所提出的建议提供支持的理由，而非仅仅列举可行办法。

　　b)两篇观点不同的参考范文

　　参考范文1——犯罪攀升的原因及解决办法

　　In this essay, I will explore the reasons why crime may be on the increase and some possible solutions to the problem.

　　When discussing crime, I think it is important to make a distinction between violent or harmful crimes and those which have no victims, but are regarded as criminal nonetheless. Regarding the first category, the causes are perhaps obvious - a person wants something, such as money, sex or gratification, and feels that society shouldn’t stand in their way of getting it. Therefore, we have such crimes as fraud, robbery, rape and murder committed by people who we could possibly categorise as sociopathic. The second category, however, includes such crimes as recreational drug use, accessing a blocked website in certain countries or purchasing generic medicine from outside their homeland’s borders. In these cases, the crime is decided by a group of people whose interests and belief define the society around them - they believe that all people should live as they do, think like they do and act as they do, and anyone who lives outside of these norms is therefore aberrant and maladjusted. In this case, the makers of the law are clearly sociopathic.

　　In terms of dealing with these crimes, I believe we should work with J.S Mill’s idea of harm. If an action leads to definite harm of another individual (arson, rape, assault etc) or the theft of a person’s property (fraud, scams, robbery etc), then the criminal must be rehabilitated and taught why their actions were wrong. If they cannot learn to understand why their actions were wrong, then they cannot be a part of society. In the case of victimless crimes, however, the cause lies with selfish and outmoded thinking on the part of the lawmakers themselves. In this case, the lawmakers must be removed and a new, more reasonable set of people instated in their place.

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　　在这篇文章中，我将阐释犯罪一直攀升的原因，以及针对这一问题的可行性解决办法。

　　说到犯罪，我想重要的是要区分暴力或伤害性犯罪与虽无受害人但仍被认为是犯罪的犯罪。关于类，触发原因较为明显——一个人想要获得某物，例如金钱、性或满足感，并且认为社会不应该阻碍其得到它。因此则有了诈骗、抢劫、强奸和谋杀等犯罪，犯罪实施者则被归类为反社会者。然而，第二类犯罪包括消遣性吸毒、浏览特定国家被屏蔽的网站或者从境外购买未注册的药品。在这种情况下，犯罪与否是由这样一群人来判定的，他们的利益和信仰定义了所处社会——他们认为所有人都应该生如自己、思如自己、行如自己，任何处于这些规范之外的人是逾规越矩和离经叛道的。这样说来，法律制定者本身显然也是反社会者。

　　谈及治理这样的犯罪，我认为我们应该借用J.S Mill的伤害理论。如果一个行为给他人造成一定的伤害(如纵火、强奸、袭击等)或者窃取他人财产(如诈骗、欺诈、抢劫等)，那么犯人必须受到惩治和教育，使他们意识到自身行为是错误的。如果他们无法明白自身行为的错误性，他们就无法成为社会的一份子。然而，至于无受害人的犯罪，触发原因则在于部分法律制定者自身的自私和过时思想。这种情况下，法律制定者必须被换掉，取而代之的是一支全新的、更加理性的团队。

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