接着上一篇的范文，本篇将介绍另一篇不同观点的范文。题目依然是：

　　It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

　　题目具体来源：剑桥雅思真题10Test1-雅思写作Task2

　　参考范文1——惩罚的必要性及可行的体罚方式：https://sh.xhd.cn/ielts/ysxiezuo/625884.html

　　参考范文2——孩子需要接受惩罚的原因及惩罚方式

　　In this essay, I will explore the reasons children need to be punished in order to learn right and wrong.

　　When I was a child I would often do bad things, such as not studying enough or complaining to my parents that I wanted to play with other children or watch TV instead of doing my homework. I would do this because I didn’t realise that playing is an unimportant part of a child’s development and all that really matters in a society is your ability to contribute to the current economic model. Thankfully, my parents understood the value of working hard and devoting one^ life to making money, so they would regularly beat me with a belt in order to make me study. At first, I would have to be beaten before I stopped complaining, but pretty soon I realised I would be punished if I did anything wrong, so doing my homework became completely automatic and I eventually stopped even thinking about stupid and unnecessary things like “having fun” and “forming meaningful relationships with people” .

　　Without my parents intervention, I would have carried on being unaware of what’s truly important in life, which is obviously a bad thing - simply talking to a child can never be enough because children are naturally ignorant and need information forced upon them if they are ever to learn the difference between right and wrong.

　　As for the types of punishment, I believe that it is a matter for the parents to decide and that no-one should be able to tell them which punishments they can or cannot use. For example, while one family may choose to deny their children television as a punishment, another family may choose to leave their children alone in the woods until they understand that what they did was wrong, or perhaps they could choose to kick the children in the head for not doing their homework. I think if the method succeeds in teaching the children the difference between right and wrong, it is acceptable. As the great Deng Xiaoping said, it doesn’t matter if a cat is black or white - only that it catches mice.

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　　在这篇文章中，我将阐述为什么孩子们需要接受惩罚，从而学会明辨是非。

　　小时候，我经常做一些坏事，例如不好好学习，或者向父母抱怨说自己想出去和其他小朋友们玩耍，或是想看电视而不是做作业。我之所以会这样做是因为我并没有意识到玩耍并不是儿童成长不可或缺的一部分。在社会中，真正重要的是你能否为现代经济作出贡献。值得感谢的是，我的父母对劳动以及辛劳赚钱的价值深有体会，因此为了让我好好学习，他们会经常拿皮带打我。一开始，只要我不停地抱怨就会被打，但很快我就意识到，只有做错事才会被惩罚，于是做作业成了完全自主的行为，最终我也不再去想那些愚蠢且不必要的事情，例如“玩耍”还有“和别人建立良好的关系”。

　　假如没有父母的干预，我就不会意识到什么才是生命中真正重要的东西，这显然是一件糟糕的事情。只对一个孩子讲道理是不够的，因为孩子天性无知，在他们学习明辨是非时，需要将信息强加于他们。

　　至于惩罚的形式，我认为这个问题应该由父母去决定，其他人不应该告诉他们哪种惩罚可以或者哪种惩罚不可以。例如，有的家庭选择禁止孩子看电视作为惩罚;有的家庭选择将孩子一个人留在林子里，直到他们明白自己做错了;有的也许会踢孩子的头，因为他们不做作业。我认为只要这种方式能够教会孩子们分清是非，它就是可行的。正如伟大的邓小平所说，不管黑猫白猫，只要能找抓住老鼠就是好猫。

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